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Topic Started: Mar 2 2018, 05:12 PM (36 Views)
Jace Valentine
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I plan to read some RPs tonight to catch up on the ones I haven't read yet. I will return feedback if you wish, in the order that I received them. Thanks guys, looking forward to this one.
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Caledonia

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Jace Valentine
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Caledonia
Mar 2 2018, 09:17 PM
*Looks at you side-eyed and points to her arm.*
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It's Jace Valentine's world, and you're just living in it.

A CWF Triple Crown Champion -- Former Paramount, World Heavyweight (2x) and Academy Championships
A Two-Time "CWF's Superstar of the Month" -- October 2017, November 2017
2017 Co-Superstar of the Year


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The Weaver of Dreams
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First of all I would like say that this is a very, very ambitious roleplay, given that you are embroiled in a whole bunch of big things going on.

I really liked the part, where (assumedly) Sahn is talking in your head, it is very intense and when you think about this going on in somebody else's brain, it really has this almost surreal realism going on, if that makes sense.

Same goes for the Vegas aftermath, tying together things and the fact that they claim Sahn had never been there is a nice little twist.

The match talk was on point, had a lot of ground to cover with three opponents and them having history with you in one way or another.

The final of the battle was intense and as mentioned in my feedback on the Caledonia rp, it reads like an action novel, just with the difference of actually being far more familiar with the characters.

Now all that being said, while the match talk was on point, I feel that within the whole rp, with the Sahn monologue and then the battle of the Academy, it gets overshadowed a bit, which in the overall context could hurt the final "rating" so to say.

Regardless of that, though, a highly entertaining read!
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