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Of Demons and Demons FB request
Topic Started: Feb 10 2018, 12:37 AM (32 Views)
The Weaver of Dreams
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Thanks to everybody taking the time to hand out some feedback on Of Demons and Demons, it's been a while since a roleplay was as difficult to come together... I will do my best to reciprocate!
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Wish i could give you some useful feedback.

I thought the intro was great. feel like the second part is moving the story along pretty well.
There was a lot of match talk but the transitions in between diatribe made the pacing work well in my humble opinion.

I reject his soul for it is tainted was a great line.

as was the final one-

Welcome to a place where darkness is the brightest light.
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