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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 9 2018, 12:23 AM (31 Views) | |
| ChristianSTARR | Feb 9 2018, 12:23 AM Post #1 |
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Hello all, just posted my first RP here and my first in about 5 years in general. I feel like something is missing and hopefully I sort it out in time but for now would love some feedback on what I put out so far.
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| The Weaver of Dreams | Feb 10 2018, 01:46 AM Post #2 |
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I really enjoyed it. It was nice to the then and now, gives us right away an insight into the character and what made him come back into the ring. Also match talk was on point, working off previous promos and segments, showing that you did your research on the opponents. Also you make your point of view and goal clear right away, so there is no guesswork. What is missing is more of a tie-in with the fed, but this is your first rp, you cannot have these tie-ins yet, because you still are trying to get a feel for the dynamics and whatnot, so I wouldn't worry about that just yet. There are a couple of typos that would hint at rushing over the proofing a little, but it has good flow, good introduction of the character (and as I had mentioned in my review of Evolution, I loved your intro segment there), which now wants me to know more about Starr and that's a great starting point! All in all very nicely done. |
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