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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 31 2018, 03:03 AM (55 Views) | |
| Jace Valentine | Jan 31 2018, 03:03 AM Post #1 |
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Its short, but it is what it is. Lemme know your thinks. |
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| Caledonia | Jan 31 2018, 09:48 AM Post #2 |
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For a short piece, this is good. The match talk was rock-solid, addressing the personal history between Jace and Stalker. Would have liked to see more on The Lost Soul but I can see how that’d be difficult. I think for a subsequent piece I’d like to see more development of why Jace would “sell out” (besides the obvious :P). Even discounting the Sunset-trying-to-kill-him factor, he’s seen at least some of the Institute and knows what Sunset’s about. It not bothering him is completely in character, I’d just like to see that it doesn’t bother him. But on the whole, good. A nice demonstration of a 1500-word challenge! |
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| Jace Valentine | Jan 31 2018, 06:47 PM Post #3 |
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A follow up piece? If only I was booked to produce two RPs this week.... Oh, wait.
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![]() It's Jace Valentine's world, and you're just living in it. A CWF Triple Crown Champion -- Former Paramount, World Heavyweight (2x) and Academy Championships A Two-Time "CWF's Superstar of the Month" -- October 2017, November 2017 2017 Co-Superstar of the Year | |
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| TheLostBoys | Jan 31 2018, 07:10 PM Post #4 |
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A couple of bits read awkwardly and despite being shorter than your usual this is still poignant, hard-hitting and well-written stuff! We get a preliminary look into Jace's thoughts/feelings that lead up to his fateful decision, one which completely makes sense to the character. Tbh I was quite impressed with this part, the justification and everything. Well done. I was surprised when it happend, but not surprised because it's Jace to a T. Which opens up some interesting possibilities. Obviously pulling double-duty you didn't want to go all out, which is understandable, so although not necessarily the top Jace stuff we've seen, its obvious why that is and it still maintains the token Jace fire. Agree with Dan here that the match-talk could have been a weighted a bit more equally but can't fault the comments you did make. And I don't get any mention? Oh the humanity! New Era of Arrogance is an awesome way to sign off. Good way to open up the heel turn and the angle, a lot of potential for the character here. Well done mate. |
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