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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 30 2018, 08:23 PM (45 Views) | |
| TheLostBoys | Jan 30 2018, 08:23 PM Post #1 |
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Love to hear thoughts and opinions on Raising the Steaks. (The title makes sense once you start reading. Gotta love Puns!) |
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| Freddie Styles | Jan 31 2018, 12:04 AM Post #2 |
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Very punny lol. I like the setting, your transitions work for me. All the Aussie things without them coming off as forced or being snarky(thanks for the thesaurus btw)...the dialogue fits with the characters...and I can paint my mental picture and see this scene. Roped in the happenings of the CWF world while still giving (to me) good focus on your actual opponents. |
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| Duce Jones | Jan 31 2018, 01:45 AM Post #3 |
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I think after 6 more promos, I'll be speaking Aussie in no time. Everything came off fluently to me between the two best friends. Everything that could've been touched on, was.. From the relationship with Silas and Autumn, to Sunset throwing a little bit of gasoline to the fire that is the Lost Boys. They come off real and genuine, I could really see these two going places. The match talk was good, spoke on everything there is to know bout Billy and Tyler, showing your knowledge of your opponents and their accomplishments. And I also enjoy the small Aussie handbook for dummies, it's always a nice touch.. |
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| TLS | Feb 2 2018, 06:29 PM Post #4 |
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The translations at the end really help out, I think that's just a great idea. This is only the second rp i've read from the lost boys, the other being the one for MWF. This seemed a lot lighter in tone. gives me the impression that these guys are always going to find themselves in some sort of mischief. Lengthwise (if it's too long of an rp there is a point where I will stop reading, or just start skimming) - I was able to make it all the way through. there was a point towards the end when they are going back and forth where I was hoping to get a description of their reactions or facial expressions but none was given. and once again learning new aussie lingo is great. thanks. |
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