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TimeStream; Prologue
Topic Started: Aug 3 2005, 12:13 PM (132 Views)
Cale
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Ok as some of you know that have read my other story, I have two storys but I lost one. Well I found it. 8 pages of the 100. Forgot I had started typing it up so if I lost it I could start back up again. OK here goes.

Time Stream

Prologue

Sayu awoke very suddenly as the last school bell rang. He gathered his stuff and walked to his locker. He grabbed out his skateboard and skated through the halls. As he came to one hall he flipped up his board and caught it. He was just in time to see Mr. Sean. “Hello Mr. Sean,” said Sayu.

“Yeah, yeah, hello to you too,” said Mr. Sean without even looking up from his papers.

Sayu jumped back on his board when he knew Mr. Sean was gone. The last part of History class he remembered before he fell asleep was when Mrs. Kane was saying that they had very “unwilling to dare” scientist for the past two centuries. He knew that his friends, Chance Zav would change that.

“Hey Sayu, did you forget about me?” Sayu turned around to see his girlfriend Kathy.

“Hey Kat,” said Sayu as he nearly fell off his board and down the stairs. As he jumped off and swept up his skateboard, he stood up to receive an unexpected kiss on the cheek. “Exactly when did you start giving me kisses after school?” asked Sayu questionably.

“Today’s special, remember,” Kat said gracefully.

“Ohhh yeah, that’s today isn’t it,” said Sayu. “Yep.Ummmmm can we reschedule th-“

“Nope,” interrupted Kat.

“Can we just go see Chance before it?” asked Sayu.

“I guess sooo,” Kat answered.

As they walked along to Chance’s house Kat asked “What did that friend of yours invent this time?”

“Don’t know” replied Sayu as he shrugged.

“What’s with you today Sayu, your acting, well, weird,” said Kat.

“I don’t know, It’s just that Chance said to be prepared.”

“For what?” asked Kat curiously.

“Well think, it’s Chance we’re talking about,” said Sayu.

“Yeah, I guess your right,” said Kat. Sayu and Kat thought in silence for the rest of the walk.
When they got to Chance’s house, Chance was standing outside in front of his garage. “This way,” Chance said solemnly. They quickly followed him through the house to the garage. What they saw in there they would never forget.

“What the crap is it?” asked Kat.

“Well, it’s a time machine,” Chance answered.

“Wait, hold-“Sayu started but then realized why Chance said he was busy on Saturday.

“Well, want to try it?” asked Chance.

“What if it works?” asked Kat.

“Then we should go into the future, or at east somewhere in time. Also, I’ve hooked up this device,” he held up a watch looking thing, “to take us back to this time.”

“So when do we go?” asked Sayu.

“As soon as my girlfriend gets he-“ the doorbell rang. “Never mind” said Chance walking to get the door.

Soon Shannon Hart came in with Chance.

“So are we ready to go now?” asked Kat.

“Almost,” answered Chance pressing a few buttons. ”Okay, now we’re ready to go. Let’s get into the time capsule together.” They all stepped into the time machine’s capsule. “Okay, here we go!”

The watch cracked.


End Prologue

Well thats the start of it. I'm going to have to cut the next chapter in pieces cause in the book it was 13 pages long. i may do one page at a time so it will be bout as long as this one is. Also any one know how to fix it where I can use Tab on this stupid thing so my paragraphs don't look so crappy.
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