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Chapter 3(cont)
Topic Started: Aug 2 2005, 06:07 PM (154 Views)
Akai Ouyama
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Chapter 3: Part III

The Will to win

When the smoke settled Wakazashi's body laid there almost seeming lifeless.
Then he coughed up blood then tried to pick himself up but no such luck. The dragon then arched his head back once again, drawing in energy. "Damn it! It wasnt enough !Im wasnt strong enough! I-I-Im going to die...Im going to die here..", Wakazashi thought to himself as he helplessly stared at the dragon. The dragon then whipped his head around and fired the beam. To Wakazashi, it seemed to come at him in slow motion. He closed his eyes, not wanting to see it end this way.....

Wakazashi heard the beam right in front of him but wondered why it had not hit. He opened his eyes and looked up to find that a man had stopped the beam. It was a man decked out in purple cloths and long white hair. He also noticed that the man had a purple gem around his neck, but didnt know how he was stopping the blast. It seemed to be blocked by an invisible wall. "Good your still alive. I almost came too late", the mysterious man said. The man then slowly closed his eyes. His purple gem then shoot out a blinding purple light. H then quickly opened his eyes and a blast then shoot out of nowhere. It went straight through the dragon's beam and his stomach. The dragon's body began to crack and then shattered as the mysterious attacker's body shot toward the ground like a missle.

Debris shoot up into the sky as his body hit hard. The man could barely stand as the wound in his stomach gushed blood. The attacker then rushed the man in purple with his fist forward. The fist then was halted by what seemed to be some kind of invisible wall. The attacker tried desparately to break through the barreir, but the man in purple's gam then glowed once again. The attacker was pushed back with incredible force, sending him flying then hitting the ground hard yet again. Three energy balls then emitted from the man in purple and surrounded him. The attacker stood up for what seemed to be the final time as he said, "ILL KILL YOU!!!". The three energy balls then shoot out at the attacker, each hitting its mark. The attacker then collapsed not getting up this time. "Thats enough. Time to go", the man said as he grabbed Wakazashi's and Shinkakay's arms. "Choas Control", the man said as a bright green light covered the three then flashed. The three boys were nowhere to be seen..........
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Cale
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Awesome! oh yah remember that other story i said i had lost. well i found it. 8 pgs for it but thats still more then nothing. ill have to finish the first chapter and then ill post it along wit my prologue. idk if im going to continue other story now. well ill post it when im done wit it. again awesome story.
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