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Chapter 3(cont)
Topic Started: Jul 31 2005, 06:31 PM (102 Views)
Akai Ouyama
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Chapter 3: Part II

Destructive Elements

"Dodged that did you? Well thats ok, you cant run forever", said the stranger.
The man then materialized a red energy ball surging with red electricty in each hand. "Three, Two, and.......ONE!", the man said as he launched one of the balls at Wakazshi. Wakazashi jumped left, just barely muissing the ball. The ball went straight into a building behind Wakazashi. Instantly the building became engulfed in red electricty and then suddenly exploded. Smoke and debris filled the air as the ground shook with tremendous force.

As the smoke cleared the building was completely annilated. All that remained in its place was a huge crator. "Well, your a quick one arnt you? But can you do it again?", the man said as he materialized another energy ball. He leaped into the air, spun around, then threw not one but both energy balls at Wakazshi. Wakazashi again jumped to avoid the onslaught. The first one he dodged clear but the second came dangerously close to him, engulfing him in red electricity as he fell to the ground. He seemed to be stunned as he laid there almost seeming lifeless. The stranger then walked up to Wakazashi, picked him up by his throat, and dragged him to a nearby building. He then lifted him off the ground and slammed him through the wall. The wall collapsed on top of him, leaving him under the pile of rubble.

Then moments later a bright light emitted from the rubble and the rocks the exploded, revealing a battered but living Wakazashi. The boy then ball up his fists as brighty yellow energy formed around each one. The man once again materialized two red energy balls and threw them at Wakazashi, as the boy charged him. Wakazashi punched the first one out of his way and smacked the other back at the man. The blast hit the man hard but seemed to have no effect. Wakazashi then came up in front of him and punched him in the gut, then did a roundhouse kick to his face. The boy put his hands together and shot an energy beam at the man pointblank.

The man flew toward the ground like a missle, sending out a shockwave as he hit. Amazingly the man stood up and brushed himself off. His cloths were ripped and torn, his body bruised. "Ive tried to be nice but now you have gone and ripped up my cloths. Im sorry but now well do this the hard way, MY way", the man said as he clapped his hands together. A electric light emitted from his hands, covering his entire body. He then lifted his hands up into the air shooting out the energy from his hands. The energy then formed a black dome with strange markings around the man. He could not be seen anywhere inside for the dome was pitch black.

The odd dome then quietly remained there for seemed to be at least five minutes. The ground then suddenly began to shake as the dome began to crack more and more. Like glass, the dome shattered as a white object flew into the sky. It looked like a dragon. It had a white body, red eyes, red wings that you could see through, and a tail that was shaped like a V at the end. The beast roared mightly as it lifted up his head and drew in energy. "Oh crap! Theres no way i can stop that...wait! There is one more thing i can try. I just hope it'll work', The boy thought to himself.

He then arched his right arm back as his hand began to glow a bright yellow light.
The dragon then Whipped its head around and fired a red energy beam surging with red lightning. "K, here it goes. I hope this will be enough.; Wakazashi thought to himself as the beam approached him. "SHINNING FINGER!!", the boy yelled as he brung up his now glowing hand. The energy beam was stop right in his hand. Since it was of destructive power, the beam began ripping away at the flesh on his arm first layer, second. The boy began losing large amounts of blood, his vision began to get blurry, he then kneeled for better balance. Then out of nowhere the Yellow gem around his neck shinned a light and began to surge sith power. the boy then shot a beam from his hand to counter the dragons. Both seemed to be even, but then the dragons bacame bigger and surged with even more lightning. He went straight through the boys beam, as if it wasnt even there. It hit the boy dead on, and went straight into the ground.........
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Cale
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Your good with that suspense thing arn't you. Well I guess I have to keep waiting. Nice story so far.
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Akai Ouyama
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its seem u r the only 1 who thinks so -_-
my 1 and only fan :P
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SBX
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LOL LOL LOL My one and only Fan ahhh man I'm ur fan too I...... just don't have much time to read all posts :P
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Cale
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Thx dude. just glad im makin friends in the clan and helpin a fellow author. Well i guess ill c u on the servers.
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