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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 28 2005, 05:05 PM (172 Views) | |
| Akai Ouyama | Jul 28 2005, 05:05 PM Post #1 |
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Understanding: Part I "Whoa!", "How is he doing that?", "Who or what is he?", the crowd muttered as they all looked on in amazement. "What is that hes wearing? Looks weird.", said one man. "Whats with his eyes? Ive never seen eyes that color.", said another. "The dude could use a hair cut. He looks like a bum.", uttered a teenager. The center of attention? A man dressed in a purple robe-like shirt and purple robe-like long pants. Along with a red sash tied around his waist and purple elf like shoes that curled at the end. The man also had purple eyes and long, straight, white hair. The strange man was floating about five feet off the ground in a meditative position. He stayed there without saying a word, or moving a muscle for at least twenty minutes. Then he suddenly lifted his head, opened his eyes, and said, "Hes close by...i can feel it". -20 Miles away- "So what did you say that thing was?", asked the boy. "Its called a Makosan Gem. I must have told you that three times alrdy, Shinkakay.", said another boy. "Why is your yellow? Are there other whatever gems like yours, Wakazashi?", asked Shinkakay. "Mine is yellow because it is the gem of Light. As for there being other gems, thats another story. Legend says there are seven in all: Light, Darkness, Destruction, Power, Speed, Willpower, and Harmony., replied Wakazashi. "Well what powers or abilities do the gems have? I mean what can yours do, flash them to death?", asked Shinkakay. "NO! Although im not really sure what all the gems do.", said Wakazashi. "Ok the, what does yours do then?", Shinkakay asked. "Im not really sure about that either to tell you the truth.", stated Wakazashi. Then Shinkakay noticed a gold bracelet with odd markings around Wakazashi's right wrist. "Well do you at least know what the bracelet around your wrist does?", asked Shinkakay. Wakazashi chuckled and then said, "Im afraid I dont know that either.". inkakay looked at Wakazashi in disbelief, and then asked, "Then why the hell do you even have them? You obviously dont know what they do or how to use them". "Ive had both the gem and bracelet for as long as I can remeber. So there must be some reason I have them", Wakazashi replied. Shinkaykay just shook his head. -20 Minutes later- "Well im almost home, so I guess ill see you tomorrow Shinkakay", said Wakazashi as he began to walk away. Noticing something coming toward them from the sky, Shinkakay yelled, "WAKAZASHI, LOOK OUT!!". Then suddenly a red colored lightning riddled the ground. Then followed an explosion but with no fire or smoke, the ground just exploded into a huge crator with pebbles and large rocks flying everywhere. When the smoke cleared a man with blue ski-pants with a red stripe going down each leg was standing in the crator. He also had on a white t-shirt with a browk jacket onm which also had red stripes on it. The man had blue spiked hair with a small poney-tail, and had red eyes. He pointed at Wakazashi and demanded, "You! Boy! Give me your gem". "No way! im not giving you this", Wakazashi said. "I wasnt asking, I was telling!".......... |
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| Cale | Jul 29 2005, 10:19 PM Post #2 |
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Your writing a story. Awesome! I'm an story person too. I had one that was like 100 pages long but on a band trip I went on I left it. I'm still praying they send it back. Started another one too. I might add it onto this. |
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| Cale | Jul 29 2005, 10:25 PM Post #3 |
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Ohh forgot to say this. Good Story. The battle scene you started out wit was awesome. Keep it up. Its good. |
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| Akai Ouyama | Jul 30 2005, 12:01 AM Post #4 |
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thank you, sum1 understands my work :D |
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