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| Akai Ouyama | Jul 26 2005, 06:23 PM Post #1 |
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im gonna start this story in an odd way, so dont be surpirsed if u dont get nething :P also my chapters will be short, but there will be mroe of them but newaz, on we go Forces of Nature: Part I They both touched down. The one in the raincoat was unstrached and wasnt even short of breath, while the one with the orange gem around his neck had several injuries and could barely breath. The one in the raincaot asked the other, "Who are you? Whats your name any way?". The injured one answers, "Rykuyo, my name is--.." "Ya ya ya, I heard you the first time, god!", said the cloaked one. "You ccant win ya know, my power is more than you can handle", said Rykuyo. "Is it?", the mysterious cloaked individual asked. Rykuyo charged his mystery opponent, then before making contact jumped up into the air. Then a red energy ball appeared in his hand, and took the form of a whispy cloud. "Eat this!" he said as he balled his fist and then pointed his hand toward his mystery foe. BOOM! The ground exploded and shuck with tremendous force. It was then Rykuyo noticed his enemy was nowhere to be found, but he knew there was no way he was dead that easily. SLICE!! The blood gushed from Rykuyo's side as his foe cut right through him with a swird that seemed to appear from then air. "??!!?! What the hell??!!" how did you--where did you..? how did you get up above me without em noticing you?" Rykuyo demanded. "Simple really. I used the force of your explosion to boost my jump" the mystery foe replied. "But the sword, where did that come from?" Rykuyo asked. "Simple", The other replied yet again. I made it from a blade of grass. Before i jumped i pulled one from the ground and used my power to transform it into a blade". Interesting" Rykuyo replied, "But now youre mine". "Enough of this!" the mystery attack exclaimed. A bolt of lightning struck the ground from out of the sky. "Ha!, Ya missed" The mystery attack cracked an evil grin, "Did I now?". But suddenly another bolt hit the ground, then another, and yet another. Finally one hit its mark. |
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| Sonoso | Jul 27 2005, 08:42 AM Post #2 |
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Your right :blink: I havent got a clue wats goin on :huh: |
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| Akai Ouyama | Jul 27 2005, 12:58 PM Post #3 |
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wat i did was i opened the story in the middle of a fight :P |
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