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| The Story of AOF; My little story | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 1 2005, 11:47 AM (1,072 Views) | |
| Vultax | Jul 1 2005, 06:08 PM Post #31 |
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A Jedi Knight of Posting
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lol SBX but im not writing anymore of the story as Entreri is in a mood with me saying i copyied him. Even tho mine is ten times better than his :P Darth Vultax |
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| SBX | Jul 1 2005, 06:56 PM Post #32 |
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A forum Newbie.
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Ur is pretty tight man check mine out please post ^_^ :D |
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| Vultax | Jul 2 2005, 06:36 AM Post #33 |
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Actually i have decided i will keep writing because Entreri aint the only one who can write storys |
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| IrishDragon | Jul 2 2005, 08:17 AM Post #34 |
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Founder of AoF
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Instead of competing and fighting...why not get together and create something unique...one of you tells the story from the Jedi point of view the other one tells the story from the sith point of view ex (story 1 Jedi POV) 'The deadly dance had Wucky on the defensive, a quick left duck a quick right jump, and he was pressed against the wall. Their sabers clashed sending sparks 10 feet into the air...' (story 2 sith POV) 'Darth Cracker knew he had to keep the Jedi on the defensive if he was to stand a chance. Slashing with a quick left, followed by a quick right. *Damn*, he thought to himself, *this guy is quick* Seeing the Jedi having been backed into a corner, Darth Cracker brings his saber down hard causing an explosion of sparks from the indestructable blades....' Fighting only takes away the fun of reading your stories. Anyone and everyone is entitled to write stories. No one's story is better than another persons. As long as you keep writting we'll keep reading, and that is all that matters. Anything else (fighting/jealousy/hate) is a waste of time, and a severe breach of the Jedi Code. Grow up and keep reading (cheezzy) (poon) |
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| Sonoso | Jul 2 2005, 10:05 AM Post #35 |
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Well that works for me. Teamwork is good |
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| Vultax | Jul 2 2005, 10:07 AM Post #36 |
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Hey ID im surprised you dont write storys :) by the way thx for the idea hopefully entreri dont mind doin that. |
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| Sonoso | Jul 2 2005, 10:07 AM Post #37 |
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Jedi Guardian
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We are all on the same side after all unless u want to argue about sith an jedi, but the clan is the same |
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| Darth Chaos | Jul 2 2005, 05:08 PM Post #38 |
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A forum Newbie.
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ok (xmascheesy2) and were u talking about me doing that rosh thing? :blink: (2drunk) |
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| Sonoso | Jul 2 2005, 05:17 PM Post #39 |
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Jedi Guardian
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Damnit chaos, what are u talkin about. You've confused me now (stunned) |
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| Vultax | Jul 2 2005, 05:20 PM Post #40 |
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no i was talkin about me but chaos you got a good role but i dont want to spoil it. |
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| Vultax | Jul 2 2005, 06:23 PM Post #41 |
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A Jedi Knight of Posting
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Here is the next installment. The jedi went further and further until they came to a large bolted wooden door. Ian steped forward and swiped at the bolt letting it drop to the ground. Irish Dragon then kicked open the door and there stood on the other side was Wucky. "Im sorry," whispered Wucky, and he ran forward and leapt into the aie and sliced Handy in two. "You made me do this," he then swiped at Tar Ancalime but she deflects it, grabs his neck and throws him against the wall. "How could you, Handi was your friend, he did not deserve to die" Said Tar Ancalime. SBX ran forward with the same red glow in his eye, "YOU TRATOR!!!!" and ran his saber right through Wucky's chest. SBX then dropped to his knees and Whimpered, "No i will not be like one of them," and he stands up and steps back. SBX then kneeled in front of Irish Dragon and says, "I am sorry master i have failed you." "Pityful Jedi," Shouts Darth Vultax as he steps out of the shadows. Just then there was a huge explosion and a large hole apeared in the wall, and stood there was a Jedi who looked just like Darth Vultax. "It can not be, I...I...I killed you on my path to the darkside," Whispered Darth Vultax. "Yes it is I Sonoso your brother!!!!" Said the jedi, "after you supposedly killed me a jedi named Nob found me and took me in and trained me as his aprentice." "What are you doing here," Replied Darth Vultax. "I believe there is still good in you," "I think we should carry on going these two have some unfinished buisness to attend to," Said Irish Dragon, and off they went through the large wooden doors. There we have it i think i will leave it at a cliff hanger at the moment :P and dont worry Darth Chaos you will be in it soon :) |
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| Vultax | Jul 2 2005, 06:31 PM Post #42 |
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HEy sonoso i hope you like my new idea about me and u in the story. Darth VUltax |
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| Wucky | Jul 3 2005, 03:50 AM Post #43 |
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You could had used names there.. im confused... did i egt the saber in my chest or did SBX? (stunned) |
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| Vultax | Jul 3 2005, 04:35 AM Post #44 |
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I have edited it now, it is you who gets the saber through his chest. Darth Vultax |
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| Sonoso | Jul 3 2005, 08:56 AM Post #45 |
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Horray!!! I'm in it already. Its so cool. Duel between brothers coming up maybe. Who will win :D Good job |
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