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| The Story of AOF; My little story | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 1 2005, 11:47 AM (1,068 Views) | |
| Vultax | Jul 1 2005, 11:47 AM Post #1 |
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A Jedi Knight of Posting
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This is a story i have made up from scratch i hope you like it and if you wish to be in the story just ask and i will try to fit you in. It isnt as good as cruisers but its the best i can do. There he was striding down the street, adults and children stopped and stared. He was the Jedi who keeps our city safe, the one and only Irish Dragon. His strides were long and powerful and his light saber hung loosly at his waist. He was heading to the Jedi Council to answer a distress call, Behind him strode Solar, Tar Ancalime, SBX, Daemon,IanTheGood, Handi and Wucky. They arrived at the jedi council to find it empty (Or was it) they strode in and Wucky and Handi went off to have a look around. "There is a disturbence in the force" said IrishDragon, "Something lurks here, something with extreme power, be on your guard." The sound of Six lightsabers echoed through the building. They moved forward, when out of nowhere a strange being leapt down from the roof and grabbed Tar Ancalime held a short saber to her neck and said, " No one move or the girl gets it." " This is no ordinary girl," shouts Tar and grabs the things wrist flings it over her shoulder and runs her saber through the place where its heart should be. "What was that thing?" Said SBX. " That was a Mekoi a being that lurks in shadows, there are many more of those thing in here so becareful." Explained IrishDragon. On they walked further into where (unknowingly) some will never return. They stopped, Irishdragon had heard something, and without warning he through his saber up towards a shadowed corner, after a few seconds the saber was back in his hand and half a Mekoi lay by his feets. "Carry on," He then said. Solar jumped backwards and shouted " You could of warned us man!" "Do you expect me to tell you whenever im about to kill something, because i will be out of breath before the day is through" Said Irishdragon. "Uh uh uh..." Stuttered Solar. "Exactly, now let us proceed" On they went closer and closer to doom. On the other side of the building stood Wucky and Handi. "What are we doing here, this place gives me the creeps" Said Wucky. "Dont be such a wuss nothing can get us here," Said Handi. "HE... HE... HE...HELP" Shouted wucky with a Mekoi hanging from his neck. "Stop messing around it is perfectly safe," Said Handi, "By the way what is that thing hanging from you neck?" "Help me you idiot!!!" "You could of just asked" and with one quick motion the Mekoi was dead. "You idiot why didnt you help me," and Wucky strode off alone. Meanwhile Handi went back to Irish Dragon and the rest of the Jedi. "Where is Wucky?" Said Irish Dragon. "He went off on a strop he will be back soon....... i hope," Said Wucky. "You idiots dont you know what dangers lie around us, the place is crawling with little freaks," Irish Dragon quickly stabs his lightsaber behind him and kills a mekoi in mid air, "You see what i mean, there everywhere," "Hey Irish Dragon how did you do that?" Asked Solar. "Do what?" Said Irish dragon. "You just killed that thing with out even looking. "Oh that... i just felt a disturbance didnt i teach you how to do that?" "No" "Anyway lets get moving we must find Wucky" So on they went in search of Wucky, but what they didnt know is that something was searching for them. They arrived at a huge cavern at they decided they would rest there for the night. so they set up camp with Tar Ancalime, Handi and SBX on one side of the cavern and Irish Dragon Solar and Daemon on the other. That is as far as i have got if you like it keep checking back and it will be extended. |
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| IrishDragon | Jul 1 2005, 11:50 AM Post #2 |
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Hehe right on! (rock) Tar is already pwning and the story has just begun! Plus I was mentioned (thumbUp) (pimp) (devilfce) |
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| Vultax | Jul 1 2005, 11:52 AM Post #3 |
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I was gonna make u save Tar but i thought it would be funnier like this. |
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| IrishDragon | Jul 1 2005, 11:55 AM Post #4 |
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It's common knowledge I pwn. I can't always be saving everybody...it'd make them look weak. With that said... Tar, you go girl!!! (rock) |
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| Vultax | Jul 1 2005, 11:58 AM Post #5 |
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You might pwn next time i havent decided yet. btw do u mind if i make u a bit evil as in you start gettin angry? |
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| IrishDragon | Jul 1 2005, 12:02 PM Post #6 |
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I am neither Jedi nor am I sith. My powers go beyond even a Jedi master or Sith Lord's comprehension. I make Vader/Luke/Emperor look like mere force sensative private citizens. _ROFL Anywho, yes. It's your story, tell it how you like. All AoF stories are big (pimp) (pimpin) |
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| Vultax | Jul 1 2005, 12:13 PM Post #7 |
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The next part of the story has been posted just looked back to the first post. Darth Vultax |
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| IrishDragon | Jul 1 2005, 12:20 PM Post #8 |
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Try to post in a large chunks all at once. Reason for that is, not everyone is going to check back to see if you updated the story at the very beginning of the thread. |
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| Sonoso | Jul 1 2005, 12:21 PM Post #9 |
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I like it, I wish I was creative, I couldn't write a story or draw anything to save my life :lol: Keep it up man, Its lookin good (rock) |
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| Wucky | Jul 1 2005, 12:21 PM Post #10 |
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1337überomfgpwn4geh4xlord
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(pimp) Even i am mentioned (pimp) |
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| Vultax | Jul 1 2005, 12:38 PM Post #11 |
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An even newer update has been added so look back and have a read. Darth Vultax P.S The next installment will be writen in a different post. |
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| SBX | Jul 1 2005, 03:38 PM Post #12 |
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ALright I was Mention thanks Vultax (rock) Hey how about i get some action too. (pimp) |
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| Vultax | Jul 1 2005, 03:42 PM Post #13 |
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You can PWN in the next installment :P |
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| Vultax | Jul 1 2005, 04:03 PM Post #14 |
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Here is the next installment guyz. They went on and on, the thing behind them was gaining on them and before they knew it a red lightsaber came from behind them straight at Irish Dragons neck, but just in time SBX lept in to the way and deflected the saber and it hit the ground with a loud clatter. SBX's eyes glowed red and he picked up the saber from the floor, and held the sabers one in each hand. He advanced upon the Sith that had thrown the Saber, leapt into the air and swung at the Sith, " Never attacked my master!!!" Shouted SBX. The Sith then through his hands into the air and from nowhere a Saber Staff apeared in his hands." Do not underestimate me, for i am the one and only DARTH VULTAX!!!!" Shouted the Sith. Darth Vultax then deflected SBX and swiped for his legs which was then parried. In the end SBX swung at Darth Vultax cutting offh is arm. "This is impossible," Whimpered Darth Vultax. He fell to his knees and SBX held a saber to his neck. "The Sith will never win!" Shouted SBX, and he lifted his saber and was about to strike when Irish Dragon jumped into the way. "NO SBX you are turning to the dark side FIGHT IT!!!"Shouted Irish Dragon. "Spare his life and come back to the light." "But he tried to kill you!" Replied SBX full of anger. "You must spare him" SBX dropped his sabers and his eyes stopped glowing, Irish Dragon then went up to Darth Vultax and said, "GO!!! you have caused enough trouble here, tell your master we are ready for what ever he throws at us" Shout IrishDragon. "Th..Th...Th...Thank you" Replied Darth Vultax and he walked off into the distance. "I have a feeling we will see him again," Said Irish Dragon. |
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| Vultax | Jul 1 2005, 04:05 PM Post #15 |
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I hope thats good enough for you SBX Darth Vultax |
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