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| your feelings about my story; tell me all the ideas u might have | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 3 2005, 06:37 PM (201 Views) | |
| The_Needler | May 3 2005, 06:37 PM Post #1 |
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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ok i noticed that alot of ppl have givin me their opinions about my story, well post all of them here and i might just add some of them in... |
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| Anca | May 4 2005, 06:07 PM Post #2 |
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Ultimate Jedi Ninja Pimptress
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It's a good story Needler, but it could use a grammar and spellcheck. Needs more detail with the fight scenes. They're over in a flash and that stinks. |
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| The_Needler | May 4 2005, 07:49 PM Post #3 |
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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^_^ well combat is fast lol but ya i do need to slow em down... |
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