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your feelings about my story; tell me all the ideas u might have
Topic Started: May 3 2005, 06:37 PM (201 Views)
The_Needler
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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ok i noticed that alot of ppl have givin me their opinions about my story, well post all of them here and i might just add some of them in...
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Anca
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It's a good story Needler, but it could use a grammar and spellcheck. Needs more detail with the fight scenes. They're over in a flash and that stinks.
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The_Needler
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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^_^ well combat is fast lol but ya i do need to slow em down...
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