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my aof story........hahaha*cough cough*; READ IT!
Topic Started: May 1 2005, 10:47 PM (221 Views)
Daemon
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Well, Needler has made me a tad on the jealous side so I decided I'd start writing my own AOF story. It is a bit paralelled to the events of the past few days so pay attention. If there are words you do not understand, do not be afraid to ask. I came out of college hoping to be a novelist, so I tend to go back and rewrite my stuff so before I move too far into chapter 2 ill probably finish chapter 1 as I am a perfectionist. Tell me what you think anyways.

Chapter 1: The Meeting
It was a dark and cold night on an unknown world. The various creatures of the planet had already retired from their seemingly endless cycle of ferocious living. All was quiet except for the sound of footsteps originating from a Jedi Master. He was a tall man with black hair, yet few ever saw this form of him as he keeps himself wrapped in robes. This was a strange jedi however, for even though he always had a lightsaber hanging at his belt, he preferred to use a sword in combat. His sword however, was about as ordinary as the jedi himself, it had not only a cortosis weave, but also major adjustments to the swords hilt that turned this "Jedi's Blade" into something more powerful than a lightsaber. His sword could heat up to temperatures beyond that of any lightsaber, and in turn, do more damage.

"Do you remember what is to happen?" A dark voice came from the shadows.
"Im having second thoughts, Blue." Daemon replied.
"There should be no second thoughts, our time has come," Blue-Emissary retorted.
"Yes, but does that mean we have to destroy every life in the academy?" Daemon responded.
Another voice came from the shadows "It is inevitable, the jedi must fall."
"DeadCold is right, Daemon. It is inevitable, IrishDragon might feel that he will command an academy of Jedi for the rest of his life, and he will, just turns out his life is shorter than he originally planned." Blue added.
"I understand" Daemon said as he bowed his head as if he was experiencing a great amount of shame.
"There is power in the darkside my friend, IrishDragon and his academy students are too blind to see it. I only pray you see it before its too late." Blue added as he walked away with Dead.
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IrishDragon
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Founder of AoF
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Hehe, I'm already hooked! :lol: Keep it coming! B)
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The_Needler
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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ahh i see.... it is a very good story so far.. yet it isnt better then mine :D its just as good but its just about something else lol

oh and i got a new master.. i still like u but u aint really training me so dont get all mad :D
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Lamers 4 Lyfe!
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Ok, my story will be two words, "I owned"
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