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The AoF Story; my story will be here PLZ DONT POST HERE
Topic Started: Apr 29 2005, 07:55 PM (1,226 Views)
IrishDragon
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:rolleyes:
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lloyd_strife
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acually im more for the plot devolping into action then just action happening i.e. what happens when the two sides ships meet will one be boarded if so will a battle insue.......no one knows.....-.- then again you just may runing a merc or bounty hunter and all sorts of crazy shyt happen but if you got with just more action you lose out on that i say let the story flow needler
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The_Needler
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well bruticus, ID is on the Jedi's side so u can either be a Jedi or be under Solaris as a sith ^_^


PS: yeah lloyd :wacko:
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The_Needler
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hey guys... sorry about the delay, but my next chapter may not be out for awhile, i've been really buy wit shit soo it might be a week before i get to typing it lol (im just a lazy prick) ^_^
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take ya time its a exellent story.
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The_Needler
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FINALLY!!!!! "part" of the next chapter has been finished (note part) enjoy




Chapter VI: Pain

It was cold on the huge ship they re-boarded, Needler still shocked. He lay on a couch-like object where Daemon had sat him. Someday I will kill both Tavo and Lynx all by myself, Needler thought, I’ll make those bastards pay for what they have done.
They set off for Coruscant, the only place left, to warn the remaining Jedi of what has arisen. The ship came into the atmosphere of the planet and it was filled with lights. The whole planet was lit with lights from the city. They landed on an oval landing pad, and were greeted by royal officials. Then they entered a gigantic building, probably used for the nobility.
“Ah, Daemon you have arrived,” said a little green figure, maybe 3 feet tall.
“We have terrible news; please let us speak in the Meditation Chamber.
It was a ginormous temple-like chamber, filled with candles and such. They all three sat down together, Daemon, Needler, and the little green man.
“I have felt a great disturbance,” the man said “It as if hundreds of people have just felt pain like no other.”
“Indeed they have,” Needler said. He tried not to tell him that he too felt such feelings, but they would ask him why and he knew he couldn’t say, because of love.
“The Sith have returned Gourd,” Daemon explained “Tavo and Lynx have caused this pain. They inflicted a whole Mandalorian society and the Jedi Academy with unthinkable pain.”
“Not good this is,” Gourd replied, “Not good at all.”
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IrishDragon
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Keep it coming! I love the detail, the plot, the characters, the flow of the story...and I especially like how it's organized! New quotes on a seperate line, not all mixed together! Makes it very easy to follow ^_^

Keep it up! B)
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Handi
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Man you should be a writer when u grow up B)
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The_Needler
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:D i been thinkin bout it lol and oh yeah gourd = yodas...uhh i not sure yet maybe bro maybe cousin or somethin
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Raikiri
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friekin' sweet!
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Raikiri
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i was thinking of writing a story myself, but i guess you got most of that taken care of.. lol... how would you feel if i decided to write a story within the universe you created? (ie; characters are similar, with new ones of my own and different plot)?
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Wucky
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Needler get me into the story and you'll get candy from me ^_^
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The_Needler
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lol wucky and chidori maybe like kinda kotor and kotor II? like yours based after mine? or maybe before...i dont mind lol let me know
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Raikiri
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haha! i can write a prequel...and add more explosions and a little visit from a gay muppet that lives under the sea! Mee-sa think this is goooooooooooooooooooood!!
lol I'll se what I can come up with...how about... Needler.. I am your father!!! cuz i was DarthChidori before i joined...haha
~Chidori
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The_Needler
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heh...It is pointless to resist, my son.....
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