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| The_Needler | Apr 29 2005, 07:55 PM Post #1 |
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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this is the beggining (LOL i just had to do the starwars start) there is still more i just wanted to put this first.... A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... Angels of Fire Episode I: The Rise of the Fallen The once thought to be fallen Sith have returned, they have re-established their order and are now under the power of a great Sith Lord known only as SolarisX. Even the thought of such an uprising made the whole galaxy tremble with fear, the Jedi feared this the most. The Jedi believe that the Sith may try to take over the galaxy once again, and this time it may not be as easy as it has been. The Sith may now finally finish what they started almost 1,000 years ago…. |
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| The_Needler | Apr 29 2005, 08:34 PM Post #2 |
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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this is the first chapter... i am not sure if this is the end or not but whatever enjoy :D Chapter I: Surprise It was a calm silent morning on Dantooine. There was a thick layer of fog about and in the distance you could here the faint sound of Kath Hounds howling. “Master,” started The Needler, “May I ask where we are going?” “Be patient young Needler,” replied Daemon, “You will see soon enough.” A Jedi, Daemon, and his Padawan, Needler, were walking alongside a riverbank about a mile away from the academy. The Needler was a Rodian about 6ft. in height, dressed in brown robes. Daemon, a rather mysterious man, was dressed so tightly in his robes with the hood on that you could barely see his darkened face. “Master?” the Needler said again “Yes?” “I still don’t quite understand the purpose of our codenames.” “Well, you see the technology is so powerful now and so many people now dislike the Jedi, so we need our codenames to keep our identity a secret.” “Interesting,” Needler said as he rubbed his chin. “You may have noticed that the Sith have used codenames forever, even past Lord Vader’s rule.” “Ahh,” Needler claimed “I get it.” “Good, so I don’t need to explain any further?” “No, Master,” They reached a bridge over-crossing the river. “Yes we should be there any minute no--” A man in a white suit similar to the one Lord Vader had worn, jumped right into the path of the Jedi. “Lord Solaris sends his regards…” he murmured. Then out of no-where he lunged towards Daemon. The lightsaber he wielded hissed and projected a blood red laser from the hilt. “RUN NEEDLER!!!” yelled Daemon as the man drove his lightsaber into his chest. “Goodbye Daemon…” the man said as he ran off into the fog. “DAEMON!!” Needler screamed in fright “Nee…..Needler…” he managed to let out as he spewed blood on the ground. “Use…the…..force……” “Yes master,” The Needler harnessed as much energy as he could and tried to call Master Irish Dragon. He reached him!! “ID,” Needler said “I have felt a disturbance is everything alright?” “NOO!!! Daemon has been attacked!!” “That’s a big ten-four I am on my way.” In less then five minutes Irish Dragon arrived. He was a kind of nasty looking creature, with the body of a man yet the head a what resembled a lizards. “Tis good I know of the ability to heal but it will take about a day for Daemon to get back on his feet…”he said. A most interesting thing happened as ID bent over Daemons blood-covered body. A blue essence came from IDs body, mostly his hands, and flowed into Daemon. Needler found this phenomenon very calming and relaxing. Then it stopped and ID picked up Daemon and lead Needler back to the academy. The next morning Needler awoke in his quarters, anxious to see how Daemon was. He got dressed back into his robes and walked out of the door. |
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| Solar | Apr 29 2005, 09:03 PM Post #3 |
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A forum Newbie.
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nice |
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| The_Needler | Apr 30 2005, 12:11 AM Post #4 |
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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ok, man im writing this a bit quick lol. This is chapter II: The Academy these chapters are kinda short... so the next one will be really long :D Chapter II: The Academy The corridor outside of Needler’s room was long it had a black ceiling and black floors, the sides red with a yellow strip going horizontally down the center. He walked past a most interesting fellow. He had a hideous face, square-ish with four, what appeared to be tusks. “Hey Virus,” Needler said. The creature nodded back signaling a hello. Next, Needler walked by a purple skinned female Twi’lek. “What’s up, Tar?” Needler greeted. “Aloha, Needler,” Tar-Ancalime said back. She was one of the leaders of the Jedi. Needler continued on until he reached a door with a sign reading “Hospital” He walked in. When he entered there was a white mist that shot from the door, probably for an air tight room. He walked forward, past some large Bacta tanks used for healing wounded people. Finally, he reached the door noted as “healthy patients” he entered. He saw his master, Daemon, lying on a bed. ID was sitting alongside him, Bruticus as well. “Well hello Brut,” Needler said. “Is Daemon going to be all right?” “Yes,” he said “Don’t worry he’s going to be fine Needler. He’ll be up and at it in a few minutes.” “Good,” he said In a matter of seconds Daemon awoke, startled. “What…Where am I?” he said “You’re in the hospital at the academy Daemon.” ID said to him “Oh no…” he muttered as if he just remembered something awful. “Darth Chaos is here,” “Darth Chaos?” asked Needler “Yes Needler, Darth Chaos is one of the Sith. But until this moment we thought the Sith were all dead, including him. I guess they aren’t if Daemon claims to have seen him.” Brut explained. “He,” Daemon went on, “Came out in front of me and Needler on our way to the temple. He jumped me then fled.” “So that’s where we were going…” Needler said. “This is horrific news,” claimed Bruticus. “Indeed Brut,” ID said They signaled for Needler to leave, so he did. He left the hospital door back into the corridor. He walked for about a minute then, turned to a door marked as EXIT, and left. The exterior of the academy was beautiful, the building shaped like a pyramid, slanting upward and inward, covered with a green moss. He saw a young girl roughly his age walking towards him. “Hi Needler,” She said. “Hi Alexa,” He said back, while thinking: man she is so…STOP I’m one of the Jedi now, I can’t love… The girl was about his height had dark-brown hair and a beautiful face. He still did not understand why the Jedi could not love, but he would never disobey his master, so he continued on, trying not to think of it. He knew that was one of the main reasons Anakin Skywalker had fallen to the dark side, but for some reason he could not keep Alexa out of his mind. It was as if destiny was trying to make him love her. But he resisted with all his force. He walked into an oval shaped arena building. It was the training facility, young Padawans wielding lightsabers walked about. Hi!! They all said to Needler as he walked past them. He entered a room labeled: LIGHTSABER ROOM. It was a spooky looking place, dark and shadowy, but he continued on. He finally stopped at a drawer marked: NEEDLER. He opened it. Inside was his lightsaber, it was all custom, the man who made it called it “The Dragons Wing” it was significant to a dragons wing, a beautiful lightsaber indeed. He exited the room to find a Jedi known as Blue Emissary. “Needler!!” Blue yelled. “Yes blue?” “Daemon wishes to speak with you,” |
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| Cruiser X | Apr 30 2005, 03:56 PM Post #5 |
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Sorry I didnt reply to your early questions. I've been kinda busy. :P since you started your own story anyway, I was wondering if you want to compair plots, so maybe our two storys can take place in the same universe. What do you think? |
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| Daemon | Apr 30 2005, 04:05 PM Post #6 |
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er. thats nice needler, but it would have been more dramatic if i said "Run needler and blocked the dudes attack and fought with him a while. like hes using a single blade and after a minute or two of intense fighting we get caught in a saber lock.....then he pulls out a hidden second saber from his belt and impales me.....that would look better:) |
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| The_Needler | Apr 30 2005, 04:05 PM Post #7 |
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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np. soo do u mean we have like a contest, like whose is better? and lol daemon well it was supposed to be a suprise attack :D |
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| Daemon | Apr 30 2005, 04:10 PM Post #8 |
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yes, and im thinking it would make me look better if i was able to see it coming. U make it sound like im a padawan not a master lol. at the least, have him wound me but have me still fighting for a while. like he gets me in the chest yet im still up for a minute fighting him before he flees. |
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| The_Needler | Apr 30 2005, 04:41 PM Post #9 |
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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Be patient you will kill him soon enough.... |
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| Darth Chaos | Apr 30 2005, 08:22 PM Post #10 |
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needle this is great glad u added me to your story :D |
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| •X• | Apr 30 2005, 09:31 PM Post #11 |
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Lamers 4 Lyfe!
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psst, add me in so i can shoot someone. |
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| Zenoken | May 1 2005, 12:15 AM Post #12 |
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BRAVO BRAVO NEEDLER!!! .. but.. ur missing something... WHaT ABOUT ME !@!! THE GREAT LORD ZENOKEN!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Darth Chaos | May 1 2005, 01:15 PM Post #13 |
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hey wait i dont want to die yet let me live until the end of it |
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| IrishDragon | May 1 2005, 05:30 PM Post #14 |
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Somehow I don't think I'd say 'That's a big ten four' haha ;) Great story! Keep it coming! |
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| The_Needler | May 1 2005, 07:45 PM Post #15 |
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The Needler.....thats it.....
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LOL i had to put that in there lol |
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